Sunday 17 November 2013

Fireworks Night by Lois (Hedgehog Class)

On Saturday I went to watch Fireworks with my family and my friend Erin.  I loved the bright green sparkly ones. There was a funfair there and Erin and I went on a gigantic slide. We climbed up the stairs and then jumped off the top down the slide, it was really fast and fun, we must have done it about 16 times. We also had some sparklers which my daddy lit for me, I wrote my name with it.

2 comments:

  1. Fantastic writing Lois! You have used some super WOW words in here! I am glad you had such a lovely time watching the fireworks.

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  2. Your story paints such a lovely picture of Firework Night!

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