Jack and the Treehouse by Cameron (Mole Class)

Once upon a time there was a little boy called jack.  He was fast asleep in his bed, it was so quiet then he heard the door clanking.  It was his mum, she said 'do you want breakfast?' it is your favourite today, toast. Yummy, so he ate it with butter then he went outside and played on the swing weeeee woo.  jack had a tree house at the end of his garden, it was his special place where he could pretend to be anything he wanted.  It was full of magical things, and only his best friend knew about it.