Once upon a time there was a girl called Emily. She was funny, even on the carpet at school.
After school, she went to Amy's house and they played a funny sort of game. It was like rock/paper/scissors but it didn't have rock/paper/scissors. It had guns, pencils and a monster but the guns always won.
It was time to leave so Emily and her Mum walked and walked because it was a long way back home to their house. Emily's Mum couldn't drive a car.
At home she got ready for bed and then went to sleep.
The End.
After school, she went to Amy's house and they played a funny sort of game. It was like rock/paper/scissors but it didn't have rock/paper/scissors. It had guns, pencils and a monster but the guns always won.
It was time to leave so Emily and her Mum walked and walked because it was a long way back home to their house. Emily's Mum couldn't drive a car.
At home she got ready for bed and then went to sleep.
The End.
Well done Alex. Interesting story. I wonder what was so funny on the carpet? Mrs France
ReplyDeleteWhat a scary game!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully written story, Alex. I’m impressed with your careful spelling.
ReplyDeleteI’m not sure I like the sound of that game, though. It doesn’t sound much fun if the guns always win, does it? I like games where every one has a chance to win.
Well done for entering the competition!